Fyra

Fyra

60.8K Reads 4.9K Votes 33 Part Story
Juli Monae By juli_monae Updated Mar 15, 2017

Aceria is a corrupt land, under the rule of a tyrannical King, and Fyra, a thief who is more than she seems, has seen the kingdom's suffering firsthand. She has wandered the impoverished towns and cities, running from the past. She saw her mother killed in front of her, and has watched people with gifts like hers burned, drowned and imprisoned. She doesn't believe she has the strength to change anything. 

Fyra is keeping secrets: about who she is, her affinity for fire, and the dark forces poisoning the kingdom.  When she is caught, and brought to Castle Bluedale, the place she has only seen in her nightmares, she befriends the prince, a charming yet infuriating mystery. But her past comes back to haunt her, and new enemies in the castle bring her nightmares to life.

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  • heroine
  • kingdom
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  • thief
LoverFantasy LoverFantasy Oct 24, 2017
Well two of her series: Thorns and Roses and Thrown of Glass.
finallyFREE finallyFREE Mar 29, 2017
Nice but this scene moved waay too fast. Flesh it out with some imagery and characterization.
Happyhololady Happyhololady Dec 23, 2017
For a first story, this is spectacular!  There are some things that are just kind of awkward, but don't worry about those, you can always do a re-write or revise and edit the story when you're finished!
LoverFantasy LoverFantasy Oct 24, 2017
Sorry to seem rude but this story sound a whole lot like a book series I used to read written by  Sarah J. Maas
KTimogerie KTimogerie Jan 12, 2017
@DilemmaDiana don't forget the use of the period when action is committed after or before the dialogue.
ngdaniel ngdaniel Jul 14, 2016
I've been meaning to read this story for a while...I'm excited to see where this goes! Well done!🔥