my mate rejected me

my mate rejected me

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omaris By christal2742030 Updated Jun 06, 2016

I was unwanted ,ugly i had glasses they all made fun of me i thought my mate would come to my rescue i thought wrong because he rejected me want to know who he was....... that was alpha or soon to be alpha of the moonlight pack i thought he would be the last peeson to hurt me but i was wrong so i had to get away i had to find someone who would wipe my tears away,some one who would love me and never leave me,would that be too much to ask cuz i dont think it is.                                                                                                                                      Amanda was a nice gurl she always did good in school she wated for her mate everything she did was good until the alpha's birthday that day he would clame someone as his but when she looks into his eyes at her party she says mate and everybody stops and stares and whisper what that ugly girl is her mate but she doesnt care not until he rejects her she coudnt bare it so she runs away and becomes a rouge after 2 years of that she finds a pack and falls in love but wat happens when amanda has to go back to her old pack to her old fears to her old loneliness well guess what she's pretty and stronger now and max can't have her so  find out if amanda will fall in love with the one she fled from or hold strong and give max a taste of his own medicine

  • amada
  • forgiveness
  • love
  • mate
  • reject
Midget_2704 Midget_2704 Jan 05
Plus the grammar and spelling could be better if you need an editor send it my way as I’m quite good for things like that. 😀😀
nickey1876 nickey1876 Jan 02
Well I think things happen too but every thing is good so far
MariaManuele1967 MariaManuele1967 Nov 04, 2017
What ever remarks u heard it just they care about your writing, but anyway please keep write u will get better soon
goddessofbookworms goddessofbookworms Aug 10, 2016
I like the story so far but it would be really good if you could use speech marks.
_livingthegeminilife _livingthegeminilife Dec 26, 2016
You should add quotation marks when they are speaking to make it less confusing
SlapDemHoes SlapDemHoes Sep 05, 2016
Needs "  " and the names of the ppl talking that's all I'm concerned about