Snatched (On Hold)

Snatched (On Hold)

15 Part Story 6.3K Reads 167 Votes
wordgoddess By wordgoddess Updated Oct 01, 2012

Light and darkness. 
    
    One does not know which force is stronger. Selene will come across the truth but, will pay the price. 
    
    Can Selene fight the darkness or will she too be erased from our memories.

Lills_Min Lills_Min Sep 16, 2011 02:08PM
You had a few grammar mistakes here and there, but none were like, extremely terrible. The concept seemed pretty interesting. Great job.
LoveJay LoveJay Sep 13, 2011 11:49PM
@wordgoddess No prob! I'm going to read the rest later, cause I don't have time now! :(
vengefulkarma vengefulkarma Aug 16, 2011 05:38PM
This is really good and I thought it moved at a good pace. There were some grammar mistake though, but they were overlook-able. :)
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wordgoddess wordgoddess Aug 12, 2011 05:22PM
@littlemisslollipop @CallmeCrazycauseIknw  Thanks so much you guys ^___^
MsArtemis MsArtemis Aug 12, 2011 05:13PM
The ending was good-it was very last minute and makes the reader want to move on. Good job :)
I thought you did a very good job for the start of your story. This was thought-provoking and suspenseful. You should most definitely continue since you make the reader want to keep reading :)