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Anon [Spoonful of Madness #1] ✔

Anon [Spoonful of Madness #1] ✔

57.3K Reads 4.2K Votes 43 Part Story
Salima By blackrosedrop Completed

    There's a thin line between sanity and madness, if there's a line at all.  Ten days before Ashley Clarke's eighteenth birthday, her life changes forever; nightmares get up and walk, strange marks appear on the back of her hand, and a shadowy group emerges to silence the girl forever. 
    Only Kasper, a strange boy that saves her life from the deadly organisation known as the Order, can help Ashley unlock the secrets of her past before it's too late.
    Ashley plunges into a dark world where she can't trust anything - especially not herself.
    Beautiful cover credit;; @kayamackx

It's a good start, very interesting. I would tone down the girl a little. She edges dangerously close to being unlikable. Other than that, not much to say. Very intriguing. Great imagery.
I'm finally getting around to reading this! Amazing first chapter :)
She_hopes She_hopes Aug 18, 2016
I already have the chills! Just by reading the story description you grabbed my attention but now I'm totally into the story
- - Apr 14, 2016
Amazing quote, and a great way to start! You've already piqued my curiosity. On with the book!
krazydiamond krazydiamond Sep 16, 2016
*she leaned forwards, crossing her--* I think it should just be leaned forward
This reminds me so much of the song 'Once Upon a Time' from Kamelot. It goes something like this: I won't stay to stand in line or wait for God's light to shine over me. I wait for the storm. I dunno why, but this reminded me so much of it