Kidnappped (and loving it!) [Slow updates]

Kidnappped (and loving it!) [Slow updates]

26 Part Story 78.4K Reads 1K Votes
Peace By PeaceLover248 Updated Nov 10, 2013

Meet Ocean Calling, a bubbly sixteen-year-old girl who gets suddenly kidnapped by a mysterious Zac Fuentes to help make a plan with his crew to destroy their enemy gang. Sounds scary, no? Not really. With Ocean around, nothing is as scary as expected. Join them on their crazy adventure, you may laugh, cry or twerk, because it's not everyday someone gets kidnapped, and loves it. [PG-13]

fxcksbands fxcksbands Dec 05, 2012 12:48AM
Wow i love this story :) Please read mine its called "Hunted and Hijacked" anyways this is so good i love it :)
PeaceLover248 PeaceLover248 Sep 23, 2012 04:19PM
@Vinnies sure I'll read your story, but I would really appreciate it if you didn't advertise your story on mine, you can go to the Share Your Story club for that. Thanks :)
dreamit dreamit Jan 04, 2012 05:42PM
Intriguing enough but it seems a little common on wattpad, but the story does allow twists to be incorporated in the future,
northless northless Sep 23, 2011 11:53AM
Woah! That's really captivating. I like how you showed us he suffocated her, instead of saying 'He suffocated me'. Good job :) voted.
Ohh intense! i like it! haha this is really good and i didnt catch any major mistakes either! voted!
Few mistakes. I reckon ur blurb shud be longer but im liking it.  *VVVVVVVVVVVVVVVOOTED* This has potentiaol and ur characters are developing ver well. Well written. :))