Kidnappped (and loving it!) [Slow updates]

26 Part Story 77.9K Reads 1K Votes
Peace By PeaceLover248 Updated 2 years ago
Meet Ocean Calling, a bubbly sixteen-year-old girl who gets suddenly kidnapped by a mysterious Zac Fuentes to help make a plan with his crew to destroy their enemy gang. Sounds scary, no? Not really. With Ocean around, nothing is as scary as expected. Join them on their crazy adventure, you may laugh, cry or twerk, because it's not everyday someone gets kidnapped, and loves it. [PG-13]
A bit short for a chapter, and you used the word 'dark' in both of the first two sentences (sounds a tad repetative), but apart from that, it is pretty good so far.....well done.....
A bit short for a chapter, and you used the word 'dark' in both of the first two sentences (sounds a tad repetative), but apart from that, it is pretty good so far.....well done.....
A bit short for a chapter, and you used the word 'dark' in both of the first two sentences (sounds a tad repetative), but apart from that, it is pretty good so far.....well done.....
A bit short for a chapter, and you used the word 'dark' in both of the first two sentences (sounds a tad repetative), but apart from that, it is pretty good so far.....well done.....
A bit short for a chapter, and you used the word 'dark' in both of the first two sentences (sounds a tad repetative), but apart from that, it is pretty good so far.....well done.....
A bit short for a chapter, and you used the word 'dark' in both of the first two sentences (sounds a tad repetative), but apart from that, it is pretty good so far.....well done.....