Summer Love

Summer Love

31 Reads 1 Vote 4 Part Story
hey it's allie:) By kidder13 Updated Apr 11, 2015

A story of two best friends summer at the beach.  Follow them as they go to parties, meet boys, and lots more.

angelhearts1234 angelhearts1234 Jun 21, 2015
I liked the description of this story and the beginning so far. What i would recommend  would be don't for get to put quotations when your characters are talking to one another. It was  a little confusing to know when it was the dialogue or  the narration.  :)