The Alpha's innocent mate

The Alpha's innocent mate

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love_muffin838 By love_muffin838 Updated Apr 15

Mia has a very troubled horrific past but could make anyone happy  Her innocent's make her naive and different but she is th most  loving careing person ever she makes everyone feel special in a different way.

Lorenzo is the most dangerous Alpha to live or ever be existed he shows no mercy to anyone. He has the biggest pack in the world feared by every living being in the world he is cruel heartless and evil any rouge that ever stumbled onto his land dies  instantly. But what is so different about Mia?

So shes 20 years old that's sad I thought she was gonna be 17 or 18.
Nacho-ral Nacho-ral Jun 18, 2016
I'm sorry i'm not usually judgy about grammer and spelling etc. But,  *Dying*
xAdorably_Awkwardx xAdorably_Awkwardx Feb 19, 2016
Oh don't dare look back, just keep on running. I said you're holding back, she said shut up because I'm running. This woman is not trying, she said fûck off, shut up because I'm running!
xAdorably_Awkwardx xAdorably_Awkwardx Feb 19, 2016
"He smelled stinky" could be changed because this is a preschooler's adjective. Use rancid or use a simile such as....... His breath smelt like a rotten corpse, vile and putrid. It was fowl enough to make my stomach churn and my nostrils burn.
xAdorably_Awkwardx xAdorably_Awkwardx Feb 19, 2016
"It looked ugly" could be improved by saying, it looked repulsive, or it looked repugnant. sorry for  doing this, I thought it might just help, you don't have to use these improvements.