My Dark Angel

My Dark Angel

204K Reads 8.2K Votes 52 Part Story
TaniMT. By TaniMT Completed

Highest Rank : #18 in general fiction. (29/08/16)

DEAD
Bullet went straight through his chest.
My Dad was shot in front of me.
He was shot because he was protecting me.
Now I am all alone.
I have to live a life, hiding from those who are after me.
All my life was a lie.
But there is someone, someone like those people but still not one of those.
He vowed to protect me.
He is My Dark Angel.
I am Maria Wilson and this is my story.

  • action
  • betrayal
  • blood
  • chip
  • completed
  • dad
  • dangerous
  • dead
  • drug
  • family
  • guns
  • hate
  • iansomerholder
  • love
  • mafia
  • maria
  • mystery
  • romance
  • suspense
  • teenfiction
arjun4ever arjun4ever Jun 27, 2015
wow!you put me to the edge of my seat I absolutely loved the part.did she really die?I hope not
RicaJones27 RicaJones27 May 30, 2015
This is such a great start! This opening chapter is so good and the cliffhanger is just spot on, it makes us curious as to what is happening and what will happen afterward. Good job and kudos! ♥
TheArtOfLaika TheArtOfLaika May 29, 2015
aww. :( who could the guy be? well, obviously he's her dark angel, but I wanna read more from it right away ;) 
                              I loved how you started it ;)
                              
                              I must also acknowledge the cover. I'm a big ian somerhalder fan :D 
                              Hahaha.
samanthaenluv samanthaenluv May 26, 2015
Oh poor girl, that's not something anyone should be going through, great start
lindayassine- lindayassine- May 25, 2015
It was nice from a little girls point of view! I would've wanted a little bit more details. I felt really bad because of what she had to go through, she was really young and things like that shouldn't have happened. But is got me curious as to how she's going to live on. 
                              
                              Well done :)
- - Apr 12, 2015
that such a good starts i really good.omg i hope the dad fines