LIGHT (An Eragon Fanfiction) [EXTREME EDITING]

LIGHT (An Eragon Fanfiction) [EXTREME EDITING]

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DraCorns By DraCorns Updated Sep 28

It's 132 years after the fall of Galbatorix, and the Riders are finally returning. A young girl sees a thunder of dragons flying overhead whilst out playing with her friends, and knows exactly what she wants to be.

Ten years on, she still possesses that wish. Despite the wishes of her overly-controlling father, she sneaks out to the Egg Ceremony - and all hell breaks loose. 

The first installment in the fanfictitious adventures of five young Dragon Riders as they train to protect the people of Alagaesia.

impossible_colours impossible_colours Dec 19, 2015
You really have a gift for descriptive writing. Parts of this chapter were professional standard, really excellent. The flow stuttered a little at times, but overall...wow.
Auraliarose Auraliarose Jun 14, 2015
Wow, this is good.  I like how you compared his hair to a hedgehog; not exactly a common comparison.