I didn't give you permission (boy x boy yaoi)

I didn't give you permission (boy x boy yaoi)

30.9K Reads 993 Votes 16 Part Story
Angel.D By AngelbabyLolz Completed

17 year old Okito lives with him mom. His life is calm and simple until he meets sora, who has a intrest in him. Then he finds out about his father. Okito becomes sad and wonders outside, he didn't care.. 
READ THE STORY TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS TO POOR OKITO AND WHAT HAPPENED TO HIS DAD.

I only opened this book to say 
                              
                              
                              
                              He didn't give consent!!!!
Dude I'm sharing a bed with my friend because we are on a trip with 7 people total and there are 3 rooms... WHY U DO DIS?! Well no I guess I shouldn't read Yaoi fics should I? Fuk it
Well... That went from 0-1000000 like  in a paragraph XDD WHY DO I LIKE IT SO MUCH
Mihara14 Mihara14 Jul 25
Well.. it's good, but i feel it's a bit too rush.. btw i laughed in the capslock-word "ASS" :'v lol
lol yeahh I know look at the first few chapters and cringe at it myself. I got better a writing tho please  read my other book on this profile, thanks!
slyCoCo slyCoCo Jun 04
ok so just saying that ain't no cliffhanger. I mean the story ain't interesting enough yet and cliffhanger? i was not even the least bit excited or anticipating.. rather a let down👎