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I didn't give you permission (boy x boy yaoi)

I didn't give you permission (boy x boy yaoi)

20.4K Reads 590 Votes 16 Part Story
Angel.D By AngelbabyLolz Completed

17 year old Okito lives with him mom. His life is calm and simple until he meets sora, who has a intrest in him. Then he finds out about his father. Okito becomes sad and wonders outside, he didn't care.. 
READ THE STORY TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS TO POOR OKITO AND WHAT HAPPENED TO HIS DAD.

I only opened this book to say 
                              
                              
                              
                              He didn't give consent!!!!
Dude I'm sharing a bed with my friend because we are on a trip with 7 people total and there are 3 rooms... WHY U DO DIS?! Well no I guess I shouldn't read Yaoi fics should I? Fuk it
lol yeahh I know look at the first few chapters and cringe at it myself. I got better a writing tho please  read my other book on this profile, thanks!
Mmmmm, I don't want to tell you how to write your story, so I won't. But I am going to tell you that periods go on the INSIDE of the quotation marks... sorry if I sound harsh, it just bothers me a bit...
Panda123382 Panda123382 Feb 27
Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.......................
                              Okay! That went too fast and I thought he didn't like it. If he didn't, why did he nod when Sora asked if he was ready and why was he stroking his thing?! I'm so comfused
Angellovezyou Angellovezyou Oct 08, 2016
BTW GUYS THIS IS MY NEW PROFILE AND THE NEW BOK WILL BE UP TOMORROW