The Price Of Truth

The Price Of Truth

4.2K Reads 119 Votes 9 Part Story
moodizz By moodizz Updated Feb 06, 2011

Alyssa Clark a bright student with a great life, her life flips upside down when her journalist mother gets murdered on the hands of an infamous gang, the police closed the now cold case, moving to new york city Aly starts investigating the gang, she finds herself in a complicated life struggling with her work and her love Andrew but what will happen when an interesting new person enters her life? will she be able to keep her love and promise or not 

Queen694u Queen694u Nov 08, 2010
It is a fascinating start with potential, but especially at the beginning the sentences ran on. She seems bright and positive even though she lost her mother.
xxemilyrxx xxemilyrxx Nov 02, 2010
wow this is a really good start. maybe later on you could correct the punctuation a bit, but dont worry the story is the main part...and yours was awesome :) xx
moodizz moodizz Oct 15, 2010
@misssanny What is it that you dont understand ?? i can explain
AuroraRush AuroraRush Sep 30, 2010
@modi77 I don't know =} (I'm pretty sure I'm blonde on the inside ---  no offense to blondes =P) But I really like your other one... I think it's got potential...
thecriticalgurl thecriticalgurl Sep 23, 2010
It was nice, but there was nothing to capture my interest. Sorry. I voted though.
                              
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VampireInAPhotograph VampireInAPhotograph Sep 20, 2010
wow , great start and i like it because its diffrent. u've made it close to home and involded friends and family more than some other books, excelent ! :D