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Love at First Kiss

Love at First Kiss

81.8K Reads 3.2K Votes 23 Part Story
Alexis Byrd By lexbugplus5 Completed

***Under HEAVY revision!***

Overprotective parents, a newly single best friend, a Homecoming Kiss, a dashing new neighbor, and three overbearing brothers define Scarlett's senior year, but is she up to the task of balancing these clashing aspects of her life?

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"Oh? What if I don't like it?"

In my periphery, I see him glance at me. "We'll watch it anyway and I'll apologize later."

I know he's smirking. "I would never forgive you," I say, infusing my tone with mocking seriousness.

"I wouldn't expect you to, my fair lady."

"I'm not your anything."

He murmurs something under his breath, but the wind prevents me from hearing it clearly. It sounded suspiciously like "But you could be."


(#921 in Teen Fiction on 4-7-17!)

*Cover images do not belong to me!*

  • ashlynn
  • axel
  • ginger
  • love
  • plottwist
  • romance
  • scarlett
I think you could change "The airhead doesn't register my sarcasm" because it seems like Scarlett is being rude for no reason.
Try using a different word then sigh because it is already getting overused.
Why would you choose each others dresses according to your likes? It’s a recipe for disaster but I guess it worked for them.
rachel_ally rachel_ally Jan 15
Believe you me, I wouldn’t want to either. I hate dances. Idk why, i just do.
You could add more detail in this paragraph and instead of two ands use another comma so it flows better.
I think you should cut this paragraph into smaller sections and have it flow more from the last paragraph. It seems a bit of a random added paragraph.