Falling

Falling

7.9K Reads 2.3K Votes 18 Part Story
Jen By peekabru Completed

She thought that wings
would allow her to fly. 
But, she didn't know it stings
to have it spread across the sky. 
So, she finally took a step
away from her own hell. 
With a smile that wept
the girl silently fell. 

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A short story of a girl and her demons. 
Be careful of what you wish for.

_JasonChin _JasonChin Oct 29
I love the fact that you turned you starting to write this story into a story. This is a good way to start.
                              
                              -Critic Jason
 #believerbc hm this is very deep and gives you a perspective on both sides of the coin here. Not necessarily letting one overshadow the other giving this a sense of balance while also letting out a deeper hidden message
Wow! Just wow... I definitely would just read this. Like, it's superb! I don't think this books needs corrections at all basing on the intro. With such few words. You made me tongue tied. You're a genius. The definition is definitely very original. Can't wait to  see what's next.; )
JaxonBlacc JaxonBlacc Oct 23
Real good start. Short and sweet. I loved the ending where you compared Home to Hell, it just shows how much the MC has suffered to think that way.
I bet this book is fab and badaśś❤️❤️ sounds so good already
-lorelai- -lorelai- Nov 24
I made a banner for you in my book "book covers " i hope u like it :) i love your book its amazing!!!