Rules We Like Breaking [Published as TEMPTING VICTORIA]

Rules We Like Breaking [Published as TEMPTING VICTORIA]

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Mina V. Esguerra By MinaVE Completed

[DRAFT VERSION] Victoria Bennett is in control and in charge all day every day, but she needs help sometimes. Organizing a romantic proposal weekend for her client in Mexico (she’s never been) would be that time – and the only person available to help her is Nathan Grant, notorious heartbreaker. She knows his past and shouldn’t want him, shouldn’t fall for guys like him, but that hasn’t prevented her from lusting after him for years. It’s just one weekend on the beach, away from people they know, alone with the guy who could cause her perfectly coordinated world to crumble. Shouldn’t be a problem, right?

For adults only.  Read if you're the right age and can handle the themes.

POSTING THE COMPLETE DRAFT HERE - SOME CHAPTERS SET TO PRIVATE. PUBLISHED EDITION WILL BE OUT IN JULY 2015.

AngelHoward AngelHoward Oct 18, 2015
Just thought I'd let you know, if someone hasn't already,  you have two people posted as Victoria on your character thing.
JuannaBeWriter JuannaBeWriter May 02, 2015
Rock stars! This story is definitely not to be missed. Nice start!!! ;)
Ysa_Arcangel Ysa_Arcangel Apr 26, 2015
I like the nick. Tori is cool for a nick too but its overused though :)
Ysa_Arcangel Ysa_Arcangel Apr 26, 2015
Hmm..is she a middle child?She's definitely bound to break some rules!
Ysa_Arcangel Ysa_Arcangel Apr 26, 2015
Very nice start. You threw that bait right away. I had to make another run through though to make sure who is who. Quite a few names mentioned in this chapter.
Ysa_Arcangel Ysa_Arcangel Apr 26, 2015
I'm beginning to suspect you have a thing for rock stars? lol but who doesn't?