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Nathan Marsh By namarsh Updated Nov 03, 2011

A young girl appears in the middle of Fowley Street as if from nowhere, injured and alone. It's up to the street's inhabitants to help the girl reach safety. Trapped in a mysterious, seemingly random dose of freak weather the neighbours begin to question what and where is safe, who is this child speaking in a strange accent? Where did she come from? and what exactly is lurking in the mist outside?
The Chapters named 'Life of a Varian' will be flashback scenes that depict the life of the young girl and how she came to be injured and alone in the mist.

SarahLouiseGittins SarahLouiseGittins Jul 23, 2011
i like it!! keep writing more i wanna know what happens!!! :D x
nathymoore nathymoore Jul 22, 2011
I like the way you set up the atmosphere, I can actually picture it in my head. The greatest thing though was how you kept everything mysterious, again the atmosphere. It's hooked me, and I can only wish to read more.