The New Guy in Town boyxboy

The New Guy in Town boyxboy

30.1K Reads 966 Votes 9 Part Story
Lurker in the Dark By Darklurker Completed

James moves to a new town, for a new job. A new town means exploring. Especially when James meets one of his co-workers. A boy named Jake. 
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James is a fun loving person who enjoys a good time.
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Jake is someone who isn't much of a fun person. 
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What will happen? And how will everything work out?


(Warning: story has smut)

I love this story  and u should  not lesson  to any bad comment that any one says they  are all just Jilouis
The whole point is to get to the juicy stuff (no pun intended) don't let trolls get ya down, dearie. Your writing is great for a start.
I love this story. So don't let others get to you, your writing is great and it's always good to improve. So keep going!
Cloudgard Cloudgard Apr 20
I think that this story is a great work of art and that, overall, you get a 10000000 out of 10. :)
Write for your own pleasure. Write this story to your liking cuz ur the author. Just think ahead past the negative comments and look for the positive it could be feedback. Keep writing <3
lanemie lanemie May 20
Well to be honest I think the story is great, in my opinion it doesn't move too fast at all, I know a good story & writer when I see one, and both you and your story are great. To say you're a good writer is an under statement because, you are amazing at what you do, keep it up! :)