My new family

My new family

191K Reads 5.1K Votes 23 Part Story
mrsxpratt By mrsxpratt Completed

* Fast and Furious fanfiction. * 

A girl named Jessica, travels to Los Angeles, where she meets Mia Toretto. 

I love the Fast and furious movies, I will follow the plot of the movies most of the time. (Han and Gisele won't die in my story! ;-))

Sorry for misspellings. English isn't my native language.:-)

Hope you will enjoy my story :-)

I don't own any of the characters, except Jessica.

  • brianoconnor
  • dominictoretto
  • fastandfurious
  • jesse
  • leon
  • miatoretto
  • vince
kmegahr16 kmegahr16 Jun 01
Like the concept but it would be nice without all the unnecessary details and more fluid sentences.
atkinsdempseycruz atkinsdempseycruz May 06, 2016
Another tip:  don't start almost all EVERY single sentence with "I" b/c the repetition gets boring and annoying
luvhaylee68 luvhaylee68 Nov 22, 2016
I'm rereading this book for like the 20th time. And when I'm done... I'm gonna reread all the sequels too!
sfsims sfsims Jul 05, 2016
read this book OVER 100 times and i love it now ive read it 101 times XD <3
atkinsdempseycruz atkinsdempseycruz May 06, 2016
Just a tip, you should add more description to paint a scenery for everyone
wildlove2000 wildlove2000 Sep 02, 2015
This is like the 50th time I read this book and I love it so much ❤️❤️❤️