Elementions: Book 1: into the darkness [COMPLETED]

Elementions: Book 1: into the darkness [COMPLETED]

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Morgan By yolopuppy Completed

Kayla Brogan was a normal girl. Or at least she thought she was. She has the power. The unimaginable power. No one believed her. Not even her best friend Evan. Until the accident. Forced to run away, Kayla forms an alliance with another elemental. But little do they know, there is many elementals waiting. 


Hi srry about grammar and spelling and punctuation and lalalala!

gwald784 gwald784 Mar 05
You keep it up and please , If this is the first two pages . They say when can grab the the people on first page like you did me I want too read more finish it 😍🙆😋
DopeMCB DopeMCB Sep 06
That was way to jagged, you need to build up intensity and make it flow smoothly.
Even though the pun was unintended,  it was a funny and really good.
TORRAC128 TORRAC128 Nov 30
😭😭😭😆😆 eve me the pickyreader likes it so 👌👌👌👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
shyReaper shyReaper Apr 18, 2015
u should update! u kind of rush it but it still gets attention! still good!