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Renessme's twin sister ( twilight saga fanfic ) *ON HOLD*

Renessme's twin sister ( twilight saga fanfic ) *ON HOLD*

91.8K Reads 2.6K Votes 34 Part Story
Rodale Glynze By KawaiiKeena_2004 Completed

.... Wheres my description before?! Anyway.... yeah

Luna-Del-Ray Luna-Del-Ray Jun 03, 2016
You mean 'child abduction' ? 
                              Your either 12 or really REEEAAALY bad at English
Hi_im_Ajla Hi_im_Ajla Jul 29, 2016
you should write longer chapeters,and don't have so much time skip but the book is great!
FanFicQueen1500 FanFicQueen1500 Aug 05, 2016
 #1:  Edward would never do that to his own flesh and blood
                               #2:  CHILD ABUSE!!!
Rikufutaki Rikufutaki Oct 15, 2016
And you'll get arrested with Child Abuse and child neglect so who do YOU think you're threatening?
SamCaelius SamCaelius Jun 12, 2015
You really shouldn't give her name in an author's note.  In this type of story, getting a name should be a big emotional deal and could serve as character development when written correctly.
SamCaelius SamCaelius Jun 12, 2015
I have no idea what just happened.  You really need to work on grammar and punctuation.  Also, cool it with the time skips.