.... Wheres my description before?! Anyway.... yeah
You mean 'child abduction' ?
Your either 12 or really REEEAAALY bad at English
you should write longer chapeters,and don't have so much time skip but the book is great!
#1: Edward would never do that to his own flesh and blood
#2: CHILD ABUSE!!!
And you'll get arrested with Child Abuse and child neglect so who do YOU think you're threatening?
You really shouldn't give her name in an author's note. In this type of story, getting a name should be a big emotional deal and could serve as character development when written correctly.
I have no idea what just happened. You really need to work on grammar and punctuation. Also, cool it with the time skips.