-I need to touch You Elizabeth
- no Mr. Hemmings please don't
- shh it will be ok I won't hurt You I promise, remember it is all in Your head ...
(This is my first BDSM story I hope You will like it).
That's really intresting beginning, dear.
You should make your chapter more long :) It's a little advice to you that to gather more readers and votes.
And has some mistakes in grammar but you can fix it. It's not so major ;)
Hey Karoll. I hope to read this story soon. It sounds awesome! :)