"Love me like You do" (BDSM)- Book I

"Love me like You do" (BDSM)- Book I

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Karolina By 84Karoll Updated 3 days ago

-I need to touch You Elizabeth
- no Mr. Hemmings please don't
- shh it will be ok I won't hurt You I promise, remember it is all in Your head ...

(This is my first BDSM story I hope You will like it).

Olga_GOA Olga_GOA Apr 27
That's really intresting beginning, dear.
                              You should make your chapter more long :) It's a little advice to you that to gather more readers and votes.
                              And has some mistakes in grammar but you can fix it. It's not so major ;)
Isaboricua Isaboricua Apr 06, 2015
Hey Karoll. I hope to read this story soon. It sounds awesome! :)