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KiKi_GottaLuvMe By KiKi_GottaLuvMe Updated Apr 27, 2013

Copyright ⓒ 2013 Behind every sweet smile there is a bitter sadness that  no one can ever see  and ever feel. In this case Aaliyah, the new girl who just moved all the way from  Michigan because of her mom's  work. She meets a cute basketball player and  they seem to be talking for a minute . Then she sends him a picture that every body in the school sees and so now being  the new girl people  people already assuming  that she's a slut and It's hard  to distance yourself mentally  from a person that you see every day.She loves to dance!

bennashyado bennashyado Jan 18, 2016
This ain't even half the first chapter and got me wanna cry 😏
pimpdaddie_ pimpdaddie_ Jun 13, 2015
If a tear falls from the right eye, it's a sign of happiness
Yoshii3487 Yoshii3487 Apr 11, 2013
I can already tell this from Detroit "the real Hood " - LOL. Its YO boy DASHY :) KEEP updated good book
KiKi_GottaLuvMe KiKi_GottaLuvMe Jan 14, 2013
@16anakueblerlol thank you i have an editor but im glad u asked and i added your book to my library (:
16anakuebler 16anakuebler Jan 14, 2013
This is an interesting beginning. I like the friendship between her and her friend. There were quite a few grammatical errors, but that is easily fixable (If you are looking for an editor, pm me and i'll work it out with you). I like where the story is going though :)
isabel75 isabel75 Jan 05, 2013
I love the plot! It well written with a couple mistakes but nothing major!