When you see her walking through the halls you better get out of her way, she's The Queen Bee and nobody messes with her.
I guess something like this would have happened without A :O
I don't like how you made Alison seem so shallow. She was like that at first, but not anymore. She's a Queen Bee, but she doesn't crave attention like that. Ali has become a better person, and she's not as desperate as you make her seem.
I hope Em understands Ali more and don't just leave Alison alone.
I love it so far keep writing please your story has really caught my interest