Divergent High Powers

Divergent High Powers

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JcPenny By tink304 Completed

Tris thought that she was a normal teenager, till one day something incredible happened. Well it was also kinda bad. She has powers. She goes to a high school for kids who have powers. There she meets the bad boy Four. Will this be a FOURTHS or nah? Find out in this book. This will all be in the Tris p.o.v section, unless I put a new name. When name is gone in the next chapter(s) then it is back to Tris.

If I were in Tris's position, I would have killed my parents with my powers!
RED_FURY14 RED_FURY14 Jan 26
Isn't she in that book just named hazel and her brother is her boyfriend🤔
SuggSundayy SuggSundayy Sep 17, 2015
Just an idea but what about Dauntless Powers high school (dphs)? I don't mind if you don't like it
Sandy_Phantomhive Sandy_Phantomhive Jun 18, 2015
Sorry if this affends anyone just saying what I think to help a fellow writer. But, I do like the plot line and dialogue!
Sandy_Phantomhive Sandy_Phantomhive Jun 18, 2015
I'm not trying to be rude but when you do dialogue you need to start a new paragraph even when you write normally. It's all mushed together and it makes your chapters shorter and it's just very confusing!