My Midnight Boy

My Midnight Boy

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Ele By elethewombat Completed

Hayley is a normal girl, that is until one night theres a hammering at the door and she opens it to find Aelfric, and he is anything but a normal boy...

paromita paromita Dec 18, 2013
IT IS GREAT. THE BEGINNING IS AWESOME. YOU ARE REALLY TALENTED. GREAT JOB.
FrostyOhLover FrostyOhLover Nov 14, 2012
I have a feeling he's a fallen angel. Hence the ripped wings, meaning bloodied back and such...just an educated guess. :)
LaurynShaw LaurynShaw Jun 16, 2012
you need to get this PUBLISHED PUBLISHED i'm pretty sure with a few tweeks you could make this book a legondary storry love it btw i wouldnt change a thing (except for the mistakes lol)
utsukushii2 utsukushii2 Sep 28, 2011
i luv luv luv this booooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooook almost through, aghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh wats gunna happen
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marialove marialove Jul 03, 2011
lmfao..First chapter and Im already stariting to love it♥
                              "well Hayley Luffkin, I like your hair" (X
                              Goshh,That is beyond hilarious!
elethewombat elethewombat May 21, 2011
@Blackcardinal  Thankyou ^_^
                              @SHAKISHINGI But this isn't a one page chapter...