Hayley is a normal girl, that is until one night theres a hammering at the door and she opens it to find Aelfric, and he is anything but a normal boy...
IT IS GREAT. THE BEGINNING IS AWESOME. YOU ARE REALLY TALENTED. GREAT JOB.
I have a feeling he's a fallen angel. Hence the ripped wings, meaning bloodied back and such...just an educated guess. :)
you need to get this PUBLISHED PUBLISHED i'm pretty sure with a few tweeks you could make this book a legondary storry love it btw i wouldnt change a thing (except for the mistakes lol)
i luv luv luv this booooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooook almost through, aghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh wats gunna happen
lmfao..First chapter and Im already stariting to love it♥
"well Hayley Luffkin, I like your hair" (X
Goshh,That is beyond hilarious!
@Blackcardinal Thankyou ^_^
@SHAKISHINGI But this isn't a one page chapter...