Everyone has heard of Thorin Oakenshield and his merry band of dwarves, including the hobbit, Bilbo, but there are few know the whole story. There are even fewer...who know of the Guardians.
Absolutely B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L start. Love your use of words ^.^
Ok spoiler here Im sorry if you havent watched the last hobbit movie.
I miss fili and kili why did that have to die
Wow. First chapter and I am totally curious! I LOOOVE your writing style and you discribe everthing so good! ☆.☆
That's great! Nice and mysterious, with a big chunk of familiarity! I also think you've captured Gandalf perfectly, mirroring his mannerisms and so on. I look forward to reading the rest.
I know u have probably forgotten but I'm begging you to update