A young girl has a life where nothing goes wrong, but one mistake changes her whole life...
StrangeEvil, pumpkinyflav, xbethyintherainx, 1nOnly, Megan15xo, and everyone else.
Thank u all soooo much, u have all been a great support and I just wanna let u guys know I really appritiate it! thank you thank you thank you!!! :) :) :) :)
Ah, an earthquake. Interesting way to start the story. I've never read one like this. You have my vote darling, and I'll continue on to see what happens. :)
So far so good but you should correct your punctuation in certain places.
I like it, many people avoid writing in the present tense but you're doing just fine :)