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What Just Happened?

What Just Happened?

2.5K Reads 28 Votes 11 Part Story
Holly By LilMissSunshine13 Completed

A young girl has a life where nothing goes wrong, but one mistake changes her whole life...

LilMissSunshine13 LilMissSunshine13 Oct 09, 2010
StrangeEvil, pumpkinyflav, xbethyintherainx, 1nOnly, Megan15xo, and everyone else.
                              Thank u all soooo much, u have all been a great support and I just wanna let u guys know I really appritiate it! thank you thank you thank you!!! :) :) :) :)
xbethyintherainx xbethyintherainx Sep 08, 2010
Ah, an earthquake. Interesting way to start the story. I've never read one like this. You have my vote darling, and I'll continue on to see what happens. :) 
1nOnly 1nOnly Aug 21, 2010
So far so good but you should correct your punctuation in certain places.
                              I like it, many people avoid writing in the present tense but you're doing just fine :)