The Alpha's abused mate

The Alpha's abused mate

36.6K Reads 1.1K Votes 19 Part Story
trinity diaz By friend_x33 Completed

Im Lee heart im 18 years old and live with my whore of a mom every day she has a new guy over to have sex with then after shes done with him she beats me tell me im a slut and i kill my brother. then she lets her boy toy have his way with me then she leave to find her next sex toy while i go sneak out to my dealer and get some thing that takes me to neverland and dont bring me back for days ...Ecstasy.. thats is my excape from mother and lukes deaths not to mention my best and only friends suicide that happed not only 4 months ago hes the only one that understood me he knew my pain i knew his. we were in love until i found him hung in his bed room closet with a NOTE FOR ME SAYING THIS ' LEE IM SORRY I HAD TO DO THIS TO YOU BUT I COULDNT TAKE IT ANYMORE THE PAIN GOT TO MUCH FOR ME TO HANDLE. TAKE MY NECKLESS FROM MY TOP DRAWER AND NEVER TAKE IT OFF ILL ALWAYS BE WITH YOU MY LOVE I WILL SEE YOU SOONER THAN YOU THINK GOODBYE LOVE RYAN ' I cry everytime ithink off seeing his body there but...

God i cant understand from chap 2 way confusing plz take it slow but i loved chap 1
I like the story but I absolutely cannot read it because of the too many grammatical errors im not trying to be rude or something im just saying tht if u edot this then i might read it
Wolflover4t Wolflover4t May 03
I think u might want to fix your spelling but so far it is really good keep it up
friend_x33 friend_x33 May 03
Thanks and I wrote this a while back I'll do a edit so for all errors when school clears up
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