JohnLock Smut

JohnLock Smut

20.2K Reads 407 Votes 2 Part Story
| Gracie | By fxckitsgrace_ Updated Apr 07, 2015

...lots of smut...fluffy smut....idk

  • cuddles
  • fluff
  • gay
  • halp
  • idek
  • john
  • johnlock
  • kisses
  • like
  • much
  • sherlock
  • tags
Drewlock31355 Drewlock31355 Aug 11, 2017
*john puts hand in pocket and pulls something out* 
                              
                              "Herez sherlock, has a cocolat kizz"
Drewlock31355 Drewlock31355 Aug 11, 2017
*john takes scissors and cuts of nipples*
                              
                              "Here sherly... haf my peckz"
The point of homosexual relationships is that there isn't a girl
Honestly I really liked this, but the only thing I'd suggest is break up the passage into smaller paragraphs rather than one big one. And everytime a character speaks, create a new passage for them. I think that's all I noticed but just a little writers critic from one writer to another.
take it slow b and make sURE THERES CONSENT CONSENT IS IMPORTANT BABES
-Psychotic-Slut- -Psychotic-Slut- Sep 24, 2017
I hate that reference. "Whos the girl and whos the guy in the relationship" theyre both men. Gay. Malexmale. Boyxboy. 
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