Crash into Me (Little Mermaid Re-telling)

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Kimberly By KarateChop Updated 2 years ago
Talise, a mermaid, has fallen in love with Adam from afar.  She would always venture to the top of the sea in hopes to see him.  When she saves his life however, she dreams of walking on the beach next to him hand in hand.  Talise seeks the dark magic of Caulder who has battled for her interest for years.  Instead of just turning her into a human he strikes her a deal.  She will have two weeks, being human, to make Adam fall in love with her.  But if she fails, the spell will be broken and she will belong to Caulder instead.
The original story (the one where she turns into sea foam) is one of my favorite stories ever! I love your book :)
I've only just read the prologue and I love it already :) can't wait to continue!!
Wow. That was a terribly awesome cliffhanger!!!! Please update!!
I love this story soo much and I'm sad that it hasn't been uploaded in such a long time. Please don't forget about this story!
Why oh why oh why did you stop uploading?! Is so good! Please write again and SOON! And great cliff hanger by the way
Sorry I didn't finish the sentence LOL I meant *Sometimes you used the word 'him' and 'his' too much. Try and use other words are use commas and conect the sentences. I did notice a lack of commas don't be afraid of them they love you! lmao