Snake Eyes by Kayleigh Chard Rosalie, a young girl of only fifteen, suffers with night terrors much differently from you and I, as the story unfolds we discover a whole different side to this seemingly boring, normal teenage girl.
@kikiko24 oer, hmm well i'm very new to this and i don't know about this checkmark thingamajig :D hehe i'll look into it, sorry about that :)
@kayleighchard oh ok because the check mark thing-a-ma-jig was there...so i just thought :/
@kikiko24 no it's not completed this is the first chapter (: but i was seeing which kind of feedback i got to decide whether or not to continue the story! and thankyou very much :D
this was good! i liked it! but im not much of a person to judge on grammar and stuff more on the plot of the story which i liked! btw is this really completed?
I'm just glad you found it helpful. I've made a board on the writing forum with some more help for things I notice most wattpaders could improve on which you may or may not find helpful too. This is a lot better than half the stuff out there so you really should be proud.