A coming of Age story about a girl who finds out who she is beyond what she was. "The fat girl"
Join Isabella as she deals with love, loss and realizations that she is stronger than she ever could have imagined.
@diamondintherough No probs! Glad I could help. Just by fixing thouse tiny mistakes your work looks much better. It's a great start to your story. The last thing you can worok on is your spacinng between words. Please carry on this story, ill be looking forward to reading more
@Peace3Love Thank you so much for both reading my work and kindly pointing out my errors.
I will admit that I have not edited any of the chapters and I too have noticed mistakes and then get sidetracked and forget to go back. So again thank you.
There a couple of grammatical errors. Like you wrote thru instead of through. You forgot a few capitals aswell.
@pinkbeex3 aww that is super sweet thanks so much. Totally love if you fan. More motivation to keep writing.
I love it already! I can't wait to find out what happens next!
ok so this is my first attempt at writing a story, we will see how this ends. please feedback is encouraged and much appreciated.