Look at me now: Diary of a former fat girl

Look at me now: Diary of a former fat girl

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diamondintherough By diamondintherough Updated Feb 25, 2013

A coming of Age story about a girl who finds out who she is beyond what she was. "The fat girl" 
Join Isabella as she deals with love, loss and realizations that she is stronger than she ever could have imagined.

Peace3Love Peace3Love Feb 19, 2012
@diamondintherough No probs! Glad I could help. Just by fixing thouse tiny mistakes your work looks much better. It's a great start to your story. The last thing you can worok on is your spacinng between words. Please carry on this story, ill be looking forward to reading more
diamondintherough diamondintherough Feb 18, 2012
@Peace3Love Thank you so much for both reading my work and kindly pointing out my errors.  
                              I will admit that I have not edited any of the chapters and I too have noticed mistakes and then get sidetracked and forget to go back. So again thank you.
Peace3Love Peace3Love Feb 18, 2012
There a couple of grammatical errors. Like you wrote thru instead of through. You forgot a few capitals aswell.
diamondintherough diamondintherough Feb 03, 2011
@pinkbeex3 aww that is super sweet thanks so much. Totally love if you fan.  More motivation to keep writing.
                              cheers
annabelle12 annabelle12 Aug 19, 2010
I love it already! I can't wait to find out what happens next! 
                              Upload Soon!!!
diamondintherough diamondintherough Aug 19, 2010
ok so this is my first attempt at writing a story, we will see how this ends.   please feedback is encouraged and much appreciated.
                              
                              Peace