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Starship Vengeance

Starship Vengeance

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Humanity is forced to flee the world that they have called home and now struggles to find a new home. The path to a new home is filled with chaos, deception, treachery, heartbreak, violence and of course the ever present Zrynt. Admiral Ryan now must decide to hide away and hope they can evade the Zrynt or continue the fight. With new enemies and allies joining the fight, the future of the galaxy has never been so uncertain.

- - Mar 19, 2016
Most stories are about some unlikely hero thrust into the spotlight, and that's frankly an easier perspective to write from. So I like how you're writing this from the perspective of someone in authority.
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AdamAdHolliman AdamAdHolliman Mar 05, 2016
I just finished reading Unity and must say I absolutely loved it, well done fella am over the moon that it didn't just stop there :-)
ed2wfu ed2wfu Nov 21, 2015
I found myself living the story in my mind's eye. You're a talented writer. This was great! Loving it :)
FloydLooney FloydLooney Aug 19, 2015
A couple "the" instead of "they" and a big info dump near the beginning. That's a lot of exposition, but that is just a style preference more than anything.
mowitz mowitz Jun 07, 2015
Good advice, but i might be good to mention the title of that first book so we readers can find it easily.  
DrivinDave DrivinDave Apr 22, 2015
l enjoyed Unity and look forward to Vengeance. while spell check works good it has been leaving your writing with a lot of words being used incorrectly but still able to read through and understand your fantastic storyline.