Domestic Combat

Domestic Combat

268 Reads 6 Votes 1 Part Story
gluttun By gluttun Completed

A couple settles an argument over whose last name their first child should inherit... with fist to fist combat.

strawberrycrayon strawberrycrayon Jan 02, 2013
Quite a unique relationship here... I can't imagine purposefully and lovingly abusing my own boyfriend like that, haha. I enjoyed the banter and the martial arts descriptions, good job writing this both slightly grotesque and undeniably adorable couple!
DailyDoseOfDevi DailyDoseOfDevi Dec 31, 2012
Action isn't exactly my thing, but I thought it was cute. :) It was a fun little story to read and you've got good descriptions. The story seems to flow to me. I wonder what their child will turn out like...
PsychedelicPsycho PsychedelicPsycho Dec 31, 2012
haha That's amazing, I really loved it! You write very well XD