She is fascinated by towering buildings and sparkling city lights. He is fascinated by her fascination.
I love this first chapter. Right away, your main character is captivating and intriguing. I want to find out more! There's not much you can do to make this chapter better since it is already doing such a good job of doing its purpose, hooking the reader.
this is beautiful and adorable and everything i need right now
Fell in love with the title, the description, the cover and just the overall thing.
this is only the first chapter and I'm already in love with this book! your writing is an absolute work of art
this is pure gold! i am already in love with her carefree attitude and aidans shy ways! :) teach my your writing ways please
If I thought your writing in Artemis was good, this is GOOD. like really really GOOD. I'm dead