Glass Roses: A Victorian Fairytale (Original Draft)

Glass Roses: A Victorian Fairytale (Original Draft)

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Britain Kalai Soderquist By britainkalai Completed

It is a truth universally acknowledged that magic is required for any young lady to find her "happily ever after" in a fairytale. This truth is so ingrained in the minds of readers that to suggest its removal is incomprehensible. But what if the magic is removed? Is it possible to find true love when the world is perfectly ordinary?

After Eleanor rescues her stepsister Fanny from an attempted elopement, their father decides to remove the family to the Continent before Fanny's indiscretion can be discovered. Eleanor finds the opportunity a welcome relief after a disastrous London Season, and is determined to set herself apart from her vain and scheming stepfamily. A chance meeting at a ball earns her the attentions of the handsome Baron Rupert von Schönfeld, a cousin to the Imperial Family of Austria. He is enchanted by Eleanor's beauty, talent, and kindness, and Eleanor feels certain that she will soon leave her stepfamily behind for good. But Fanny is angry over Eleanor's interference in her elopement, and gossip is a powerful engine for revenge. As rumors begin to fly, Eleanor's only comfort is writing about her troubles to her cousin, Isabella.

Isabella, meanwhile, has an adventure of her own to share. Her father has formed a friendship with the surly Duke William of Stirling. His rough manners and intentional slights are irritating, especially to a proper young lady, but Isabella is more than a match with a fiery wit of her own. Then the Duke invites her father to visit his castle in the wilds of the Scottish countryside, and Isabella soon realizes that the Duke's prickly demeanor hides a kind heart and a mysterious accident from his past. Her heart tells her to let the past rest, but her mind is unwilling give up on discovering the Duke's secrets, and her curiosity might keep her from the happy ending she desires.

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Meh, their opinions are overrated. ;-) But, Paris should divert some of their ire...I think.
Or the rake guy brought it for her. Did she run away with him??
ljennings1 ljennings1 Apr 27, 2016
Such a wonderful first chapter.  I love the plot I will read this today as I have taken the day off to care for my husband.
JeSuisMarie-D JeSuisMarie-D Dec 29, 2016
Be honest. How many of the characters are named for Jane Austen ladies?
JEHallows JEHallows Mar 21, 2016
The idea of writing a victorian fairy tale in the style of a regency classic is intriguing! I loved your blurb, and your opening chapter is everything I could have expected. Very well written.
Jkilmer Jkilmer Jun 28, 2016
You had me at the very first sentence of your blurb and the mention of the Scottish highlands. And this chapter was lovely!