The Bad boys baby

The Bad boys baby

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princess6363 By princess6363 Updated Feb 24, 2016

What It can't be why me my life is going to change what am I going to do! Nicole Gullett  is 17 and her friends throw her a surprise birthday party what she didn't know was Joshua McClain the bad boy the player of the school would change her life find out what happens will he stay with her or leave her to be all alone?

jnh040911 jnh040911 Apr 30
I'll be at ur funeral..... but what time will it be at because I have some things to do and what are the colors not trying to be dressed in wrong colors
What are the colors for your funeral? I don't want to seem rude when I come...
Angeline-- Angeline-- Jan 15, 2017
No hate at all, but where is all the commas and periods? Not hating, just wondering.
zariajones246 zariajones246 Mar 28, 2016
Why don't you quote what they are saying . Its hard to read .
Echoloki Echoloki Mar 18, 2016
So, most of this is a runon sentance. Add some periods in there and it will be better. :)
Jaigra77 Jaigra77 Nov 30, 2015
I agree also you never said that you switched to other female character