Sky is different but she doesn't know that yet. Then she meets Snake, a mysterious, handsome guy who shows her her real world. Maybe her life wouldn't be that complicated if he would tell her the secret about the water and his secret.
I like the way you are trying to plug the BMW to us with the URL and everyhting, its cute. LOL, I'm only joking, but now you've got me hooked, I wanna know about snake (who is obviously throwing the stones at Sky's Window, am I right?)
I saw you advertising on my friends profile and the name was interesting so... I decide to check it out and... I love it iy seriously intriguing!!!
Awesome, I wasn't expecting that thing at the end >.> That stalker xD
Love the story :]
But yeah, you repeated a paragraph twice, but other then that its fine.
yh i think that you put a paragragh in twice, but everything else is cool, so please upload as soon as you can!!!!!!!!!!! luv ya story!!!!!!!!
i like this, its not giving too much away. i does need editting but that can be done anyytime and most people on wattpad don't bother with editting anyway
Hey..sorry it took so long for me to read this, I've been a little busy lately..but anyway, this is really good...I hope you continue cause I wanna know what's up with the Snake dude...