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Amy Crandall By xXAmy_CXx Completed

|Book 1 of the Betrayal Trilogy|

"N--No! Leave her alone! Please, leave her alone," I say weakly, "she has nothing to do with this!"

"That is where you are wrong, Melanie," he replies. I can actually hear the smile in his voice as he continues to speak. "You see, she is meddling in business that isn't hers to meddle in, and I told you that there would be punishment if you went to the police. Now, I must go. Laura requires my very special attention at the moment."

A girl's scream rips through the receiver; Laura's. Before I can yell for him to stop, the line clicks.


When Melanie Larkin's best friend is murdered by Melanie's stalker, her and her mother flee to a new town where the FBI and police keep a watchful eye over them. The only problem is, Melanie's stalker knows where she has gone. How does Melanie know this?

He leaves a white rose in her room every night while she's asleep.


#2 in Horror on August 1st 2015
Published on March 27th 2015

WaxOnFvckOff WaxOnFvckOff May 17, 2016
No he's trying to tell you he's taking her out for ice cream
Bubbles9600 Bubbles9600 Dec 13, 2015
IT'S ME! IM IN CALIFORNIA DREAMING ABO- ohoh... Sorry... Not the time...
Khissal Khissal Nov 13, 2015
Great first part. I just stumbled upon your book and found that it was really very good. Excellent writing and catchy words. I mean you are too good.
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TammiCharles TammiCharles May 31, 2015
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