So sam has a daughter 9 years old, Alexis. But he has no idea of her existence.
Her mother dies leaving a note for her
What the note says? You'll have to find out when you read this story
This is really good just try and Like space things out and try and put the word said after and use it less instead you could you use like questioned asked whispered whimpered things like that to add more emotion than just said
It's good but very choppy and rushed. Try to put more details and explain things more.
This book kind of sounds like the book by truesupernatual13 just a little different
lmao my name is Jason but everyone calls me cornchip. My hobbies include bruising of the face. My friend learned the hard way when he sexually whispered 'Hydrogen Peroxide' into my ear. I enjoy food, rock, frisky women, and frisky men.
she just what I picture of our daughter mine and my and a lot others semi pie Sam
Its a little unclear on the transitions but good job! Very interesting