Dear Richard,
      If your reading this, then either I am dead or I have found it time to tell you the truth.  Your mother and I wanted to shield you from the truth for as long as we could, but at some point we knew we would have to tell you. You see, Richard, everything is not as you have always imagined it to be...
I love how you opened this! The letter format gave me more of a personal insight into the main character, which I liked! You have a beautiful cover too!:) This chapter really makes me want to read on - I like how you kept some information to yourself so that the reader is drawn in to read more! Great job, got my vote!
I love how you opened this! The letter format gave me more of a personal insight into the main character, which I liked! You have a beautiful cover too!:) This chapter really makes me want to read on - I like how you kept some information to yourself so that the reader is drawn in to read more! Great job, got my vote!
I love how you opened this! The letter format gave me more of a personal insight into the main character, which I liked! You have a beautiful cover too!:) This chapter really makes me want to read on - I like how you kept some information to yourself so that the reader is drawn in to read more! Great job, got my vote!
I love how you opened this! The letter format gave me more of a personal insight into the main character, which I liked! You have a beautiful cover too!:) This chapter really makes me want to read on - I like how you kept some information to yourself so that the reader is drawn in to read more! Great job, got my vote!
I love how you opened this! The letter format gave me more of a personal insight into the main character, which I liked! You have a beautiful cover too!:) This chapter really makes me want to read on - I like how you kept some information to yourself so that the reader is drawn in to read more! Great job, got my vote!
I love how you opened this! The letter format gave me more of a personal insight into the main character, which I liked! You have a beautiful cover too!:) This chapter really makes me want to read on - I like how you kept some information to yourself so that the reader is drawn in to read more! Great job, got my vote!