Torn Between Reality - z.m

Torn Between Reality - z.m

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💫  Too many names 💤 By 22ZaynisBeautiful Updated 4 days ago

Torn Between Reality © 
                                                     ❝What is love if all we have are happy endings?❞

   When heartbreak takes a twist in fate, and some things came too late, when love is designed to hate, and reality makes its wait. What happens when three worlds collide? When life or death is all that matters? When you love someone so much it hurts? What happens...when you fall in love? What if your story isn't a fairytale? And in reality, you're torn. What if there's no happy ending to your story?
                                        How did I know that my love for her would be the end of her?

                                                           You called me out and taught me tough
                                                                               With love, with love.
                                                           You fought my flaws, my teeth, my claws
                                                                               With love, with love.
                                                    'Cause every time I'm slipping away from myself,
                                                      You're the one that moves me like nobody else.

                                                                'Cause when I'm down and I'm done,
                                                                          And I'm coming unplugged
                                                                               When I'm ready to fall
                                                              You're the one always holding me up
                                                                                          With love

  • baby
  • coma
  • death
  • direction
  • fan
  • fanfiction
  • fic
  • harry
  • hate
  • heartbreak
  • loss
  • louis
  • love
  • malik
  • murder
  • one
  • perrieedwards
  • romance
  • wattys2016
  • zayn
                              okay I may not be a one direction fan but I like the background. Instead of being in the band straight away they met different (Zayn and Harry) and I really liked that. Perhaps you could go into a slight more detail to emphasise the scenes importance. But I really liked this well done!
-Writing_Is_Life- -Writing_Is_Life- an hour ago
                              This is a great opening and Ii loved all the details that you used. The way you worded things was also pretty good
-Writing_Is_Life- -Writing_Is_Life- 44 minutes ago
                              I love the way you show the characters thoughts and worries. It is great for a story and it really helps to keep the story going. So it is great that you do that and keep it pretty detailed
paddyptah89 paddyptah89 Jul 31
Bit of a stupid reason to get sacked. I would sue for unfair dismissal twould be quite the page turner
paddyptah89 paddyptah89 Jul 31
I hate 1 direction with a passion so this story is deffiantly not for me...But it was well written and I can tell you have loads of 1 Ds fans so I guess you are appealing to a specific target audiance. Well done
-BnaniB- -BnaniB- Sep 10, 2016
That was a beautiful chapter ♡ 
                              Even from a male's narrative, that's kinda rare in books, on Wattpad.