Obsession

Obsession

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kvanhooser By kvanhooser Completed

Parker has been watching Jamie for years. She has no idea who he is. He intends to keep it that way. But when complications force together under terrible circumstances will Parker get the girl of his dreams or walk away empty handed? Will he even allow that?

Braniac-0 Braniac-0 Apr 07, 2016
Well.... I'm sure he is completely sane....
                              
                              This is actuated brilliantly written, I don't normally read this sort of books, but I like the character build up, I look forward to reading more.
cindysrm cindysrm Apr 18, 2016
As you can tell I don't know much about grammar so I found no faults with that. I like this chapter but the disruption about Jamie could have been longer and also I think the Chapters is too short. Aside from those great story thus far
Kidrauhls_Cutie Kidrauhls_Cutie Mar 28, 2016
Love it so far. The portrayal of her obsession seemed kind of weak though.
Crazy-_-squirrels Crazy-_-squirrels May 01, 2016
Constructive comment: I didn't seen anything wrong with the chapter, you have perfect description of Jamie. I like how you kept it short and sweet for the beginning, it's like a little insight to everything.
Crazy-_-squirrels Crazy-_-squirrels May 01, 2016
... Umm, CHILL BRO! I'm no better I stare at my crush from afar in the lunch room. Wait I am better I not taking pictures of him!
Dragon_s_Shade Dragon_s_Shade Apr 06, 2016
Wow! Great work.
                              It was short and sweet. 
                              The first impression of the girl on the narrator is beautifully depicted. 
                              Had I been there instead of him, I would have talked to her.
                              
                              Looking forward for this book.