Obsession

Obsession

74.5K Reads 2.7K Votes 40 Part Story
kvanhooser By kvanhooser Completed

Parker has been watching Jamie for years. She has no idea who he is. He intends to keep it that way. But when complications force together under terrible circumstances will Parker get the girl of his dreams or walk away empty handed? Will he even allow that?

Braniac-0 Braniac-0 Apr 07
Well.... I'm sure he is completely sane....
                              
                              This is actuated brilliantly written, I don't normally read this sort of books, but I like the character build up, I look forward to reading more.
This is nice. Articulate. And the first parahraph had me hooked. 👌🏻
cindysrm cindysrm Apr 18
As you can tell I don't know much about grammar so I found no faults with that. I like this chapter but the disruption about Jamie could have been longer and also I think the Chapters is too short. Aside from those great story thus far
Love it so far. The portrayal of her obsession seemed kind of weak though.
Constructive comment: I didn't seen anything wrong with the chapter, you have perfect description of Jamie. I like how you kept it short and sweet for the beginning, it's like a little insight to everything.
... Umm, CHILL BRO! I'm no better I stare at my crush from afar in the lunch room. Wait I am better I not taking pictures of him!