Obsession

Obsession

104K Reads 3.6K Votes 40 Part Story
kvanhooser By kvanhooser Completed

Parker has been watching Jamie for years. She has no idea who he is. He intends to keep it that way. But when complications force together under terrible circumstances will Parker get the girl of his dreams or walk away empty handed? Will he even allow that?

LanaBerry LanaBerry Jun 07
Does anyone else think that this dude is insane and stalking this poor girl
_Stiles24_ _Stiles24_ Apr 11
Reminds me of Matt when he took photos of Allison on Teen Wolf
_Stiles24_ _Stiles24_ Apr 11
This wouldn't be creepy if he actually knew her and he wasn't stalking her so if he was a loving boyfriend or something like that
cindysrm cindysrm Apr 18, 2016
As you can tell I don't know much about grammar so I found no faults with that. I like this chapter but the disruption about Jamie could have been longer and also I think the Chapters is too short. Aside from those great story thus far
Crazy-_-squirrels Crazy-_-squirrels May 01, 2016
Constructive comment: I didn't seen anything wrong with the chapter, you have perfect description of Jamie. I like how you kept it short and sweet for the beginning, it's like a little insight to everything.
Crazy-_-squirrels Crazy-_-squirrels May 01, 2016
... Umm, CHILL BRO! I'm no better I stare at my crush from afar in the lunch room. Wait I am better I not taking pictures of him!