The Light in My Darkness (Stefan Salvatore) Editing

The Light in My Darkness (Stefan Salvatore) Editing

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Amanda By Amanda160 Completed

We all know Stefan went through what was referred to as his Ripper stage. He lost his humanity and turned into a psychopath- but hasn't anyone wondered what made him turn his humanity switch back on? What pulled him out of that darkness? Well, I'll tell you. A girl, Jade Symone, somehow managed to catch his eye. One way or another, they fell in love... and this is how.

KpAnne KpAnne Mar 29
I agree with the rest of the comments about your formatting. Maybe spacing it out a bit to allow readers to comment/interact on each paragraph or phrase they enjoyed. However, great chapter :)
liamsbaexx liamsbaexx May 20
Again, the story its self is great but the spacing is a bit messy.
I really like the book but please space out your paragraphs because it makes it look all cluttered. But other than that I really like it.
Great chapter well done but I do agree to just space out your paragraphs a little bit but I like this story
liamsbaexx liamsbaexx May 20
I agree with everyone else. Your book is really awesome but the only that needs to be fixed is the formatting because it is a little bit messy. Otherwise this was really cool. ☺
Very good book. Very intresting, but make space in between your paragraphs because then being clutter, it's her to concentrait.