Don't Want To Loose You

Don't Want To Loose You

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Ms. Sagittarius By Bhaby_love28 Completed

Elizabeth Sandoval (Ellie) believe in love before she was betrayed by one of her best friend.  Because of the Betrayal of her lover and friend now it was hard for her to believe that someone can love her just the way she was. After knowing the reason why his ex-boyfriend cheated on her made her change and made her heart cold as ice. She is no longer the simple, hopeless romantic and selfless girl who will do everything for the one she love.

Nickolas De Angelo (Nick) is one of a popular business man in Asia. You can say that he have everything from fame, fortune, good looks and sexy as hell body to die for that all women will not a second chance refuse. He can have everything he want because no one can refuse and resist his charms. Coming from broken family he doesn't believe in relationship or serious attachment.

Will Ellie be brave enough to love again? 
Can Nick finally be in a serious relationship?

unsolvedestiny unsolvedestiny Dec 13, 2016
 #BCN
                              
                              Katawan mo lang ang naging manhid pero ang utak at puso mo hindi yan magiging manhid dahil sa alak.
PonyTeylGirl PonyTeylGirl Oct 18, 2016
 #BWRC 
                              
                              Yeah right. Hindi solusyon ang mga ginagawa niya sa mga nangyayaring problema sa kanya. Ang ganda ng pinakakita ng character nice start
unsolvedestiny unsolvedestiny Dec 13, 2016
 #BCN
                              
                              Lasing ma na bebe gurl kaya bumigay ka, I mean sinabayan mo siya. Hehe
ChanChummy22 ChanChummy22 Oct 17, 2016
 #BWRC
                              Parang tungkol na naman to sa brokenhearted haha 😂 kawawa naman siya. Now i know na yung title 😂 pero yung bookcover wahaha 😍
silver_euphoria silver_euphoria Jun 27, 2016
From Mid-laners book club! :) hello, nagulat naman ako,sa cover. Ang daring beh. Hahaha😂 anyways, interesting story. Keep it up!
JazzmynElva JazzmynElva 5 days ago
 #BCN 
                              
                              Nice start so far but there's need to improve like in every dialogues, you need to put a comma every time you paused in a sentence. Try mong i-check by reading it. Parang nakakahingal kasi kung babasahin mo kung walang comma. Then yung mga repeated Tagalog words dapat may dash.