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Golden Fury

Golden Fury

9.7K Reads 609 Votes 24 Part Story
TheTravellersloft By TheTravellersloft Updated Aug 21, 2013

When your world has been shattered, your idea of right and wrong corrupted beyond question; and the belief that you are alone in a world dominated by slavery – there is a choice – do you exploit the diffident ‘Yellow’s’ who are enigmas of their own past, or trust your own kind, the ‘Colour’s’ whose ideas of suffering is far beyond anything you’ll ever imagine…

LadyAireen LadyAireen Aug 09, 2013
Who is that boy? why did they kill him? and wow, your MC's voice has a very easy going tone to it. I like how you write. It moves you into the pace of the story. No cut offs. OFF to next chapter :3
TheTravellersloft TheTravellersloft May 17, 2013
@Navinal Thank you! :) I hope you continue to enjoy reading :)
AceoftheWest AceoftheWest Mar 16, 2013
Wow what a way to start off! My god! I wanted to kill her parents myself the evil no good lusy...holy dang I cannot get over this chapter! it's absolutely brilliant! One thing I would recommend would be breaking up your paragraphs but other than that nice job! I love the description!
- - Mar 13, 2013
Liking your description and your writing style. Also your dialogue, keep it up. -voted!
TheTravellersloft TheTravellersloft Mar 13, 2013
@AlexanderEdwards Haha thanks, I hope it lives up to your expectations! Oooo thank you for following! Yay! :)
EliSummers EliSummers Mar 13, 2013
Wow. That was extremely well written. Poor Slaves. I look forward to reading the rest. It better be as good. =D