19K Reads 334 Votes 7 Part Story
jay By Jayy_28 Completed

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  • danger
  • girl
  • kidnapped
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  • mystery
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pickles2705 pickles2705 Mar 14
How old does that make her then, I’m from England and we don’t do semesters, not from where I’m from anyways.
JacqTheWriter JacqTheWriter Jan 21, 2017
Third semester? Semesters come in increments of two. Trimesters come in threes.
Marinedinosaur Marinedinosaur Jan 27, 2017
I like how the mom just lets her daughter out whenever. It's so funny how she might get killed and she doesn't think about it XD
NhungCauVanHay NhungCauVanHay Dec 13, 2015
TIP: Put space between dialogue. 
                              YOU: "OK, see you whenever!" "Bye!" 
                              TIP:   "OK, see you whenever!"