Fire Angels

Fire Angels

872 Reads 10 Votes 5 Part Story
h3ARTofh3ARTs By h3ARTofh3ARTs Updated Nov 17, 2011

In the past, Vam-pyrism was power. But what happens when full-fledged war breaks out and vam-pyres seem to go extinct? Will love survive across centuries?

smexykakashi smexykakashi Nov 17, 2011
Very good. Why no one else is commenting.its a good story idea.
smexykakashi smexykakashi Nov 17, 2011
I liked the way you start the story by giving descriptions of some of the characters and the scene.
h3ARTofh3ARTs h3ARTofh3ARTs Sep 29, 2010
@Pinkkida oh haha.. that's cause i used smartical language like usual.. but idk if i should keep on.. I'll read it
pinkkida pinkkida Sep 29, 2010
Ok i think its gud. But the story starts up a bit comfuse.  U should defi keep on. Im vote* so by the way u would plz read my story (Imprint with a vampire? No!) thanks
NikkiTheDarkAngel NikkiTheDarkAngel Aug 16, 2010
hurrtys up an write chappie 3  !!!!! ~~~ 
                              
                              btw... 
                              
                              dude... 
                              
                              read my story!! o-o 
                              
                              I need ur opinion plz !!! >w<
                              
                              ~Nikki
NikkiTheDarkAngel NikkiTheDarkAngel Aug 16, 2010
hurry up an post chap 2 baka!!
                              
                              
                              or me kills chu on thursday!~~
                              
                              CX
                              
                              ~Nikki