Dreams to Nightmares.

Dreams to Nightmares.

1K Reads 22 Votes 9 Part Story
Amber By iiTranquility Updated Dec 03, 2010

A girl is injected with a lethal serum that will forever change her life. She turns into an unknown mythological creature that holds an equally unknown gift. She is taken into a new world by the name of PhanTan where she meets all new friends and one boy she can't quite figure out, Chase. When an attack on PhanTan is planned Zayde is betrayed by someone within the PhanTanian Academy and is taken to yet another world, the world in which she was born in: Hollistania. In Hollistania she is trained to fight against the Phantanians for ultimate domination over all domains. Will she be able to go against her new found friends and the world where she was cherished most? Or will the fact of being the most powerful girl in all of Hollistania brain wash her entirely?

iiTranquility iiTranquility Aug 17, 2010
@lolipoparcade Yea. I realized I did that after I posted it. Then I was like "Eh, whatever." XP
lolipoparcade lolipoparcade Aug 17, 2010
@iiTranquility 
                              
                              haha its fine!! oh and make sure when you reply you click the reply button, or ppl wont know you replied back lol :) 
iiTranquility iiTranquility Aug 17, 2010
I am so glad you're editing this. XD I need to learn to reread before I put my stuff up. X.x
lolipoparcade lolipoparcade Aug 17, 2010
oooh :)
                              
                              haha okay the mistakes i saw were you said door twice in same sentence so it messed with the flow, and then of instead of off, and then you just need to add to on the part where she pounced *to* the door way :)
                              
                              other then that super great job :) im loving this story
                              
                              
iiTranquility iiTranquility Aug 16, 2010
@lolipoparcade Lmao. Oops. XD I'll hafta edit that. Thank you so much ^^
lolipoparcade lolipoparcade Aug 16, 2010
Wow...wow..wow!!
                              spectacular
                              
                              only a few mistakes...like instead of men you said mean :)
                              
                              but this was amazing the detail and explanation of the scene made me feel like i was actually there super duper job! :)