Memories of a Life That Never Happened

Memories of a Life That Never Happened

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Olivia Hilst By olihilst Completed

Micaela Ortiz is a seventeen year-old girl who lives in a fishing village in the South of Brazil. She wishes to leave her uneventful hometown in search of a more exciting lifestyle. While that does not happen, she dreams of mingling with the celebrities. 

Every December, her town is swarmed by tourists from all over the world, who come for a very exclusive New Year’s Eve party. In 1997, the stars seem to be conspiring in her favor, because she manages to attend the coveted festivity. There, she meets Theo Chuster, son of the mastermind behind the party, Nicholas Chuster. 

Despite their differences, Theo and Micaela grow closer. As they spend time together, however, Mica discovers the high society has a dark side. People closest to them constantly plot against their relationship. 

And when Micaela becomes involved in a crime, she is forced to fight for her life and Theo’s family can turn out to be either her doom or her salvation.

  • beach
  • brazil
  • coming
  • crime
  • love
  • mystery
  • smalltown
  • summer
  • superstitions
  • teenage
SamMaze SamMaze Mar 29, 2015
Hello!
                              
                              This was a nice start to your tale. You had a few comma errors, but besides that this was flawless. I liked how you began the story at the end, not many tales do this. God Bless, and keep up the good work! :)
jjhandel jjhandel Mar 26, 2015
Great plot, very well written, couldn't stop reading! Also liked the short chapters structure, perfect for bed time reading, Can't wait for the next one! Many thanks for sharing and I am sure it will be a great success!