i am mated to twin alphas...wait what !?

i am mated to twin alphas...wait what !?

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Shayna Davis By 1999shaynadavis Completed

Hi. my name is blade. my friends call me angel. i am 17. i am a junior in high school. so let me tell you some stuff about me. in school i am not the person to mess with. i am an alpha born. ya i know you are probably asking why a alpha born is in school. well i am only a junior.

stardust2461 stardust2461 Nov 01, 2016
Can you give each person a separate line in the phone conversation
- - Feb 21, 2016
I like your story but, you should work on grammar. I feel all the sentences and conversations are so clumped together, it's hard to tell who is who and what is going on.
jhefli0353 jhefli0353 2 days ago
How did they not complete the mating process if they had children
wolfedge10 wolfedge10 Jul 04, 2016
Can you underline or use bold letters for the phone conversation its not very clear whats going on
Morgans_Freedom Morgans_Freedom Mar 27, 2016
Such a great book but kinda difficult to  read because there is no capital letters and stuff like that.  Still a great book
ReganLeigh8 ReganLeigh8 Aug 11, 2016
That's just like me except my eyes don't change colour😂💯